Chapter One... Hooking the Reader
Our fearless leader of Blog Hop, Skye, challenged us to talk about how Chapter One hooks our readers- specifically, what we do to get that hook working. Sounds simple but in my experience it varies from audience to audience and from book to book. Certainly the hook in Chapter One of an entry in a long series will be different from Chapter One in a standalone. You see, in long series, we expect readers to know the main characters, settings and the way the plots work. The simplest way to approach this challenge, I think, is to look at the opening scenes of a handful of books to see how they work. Book 1: Heather and Heath: It had been late summer when the May Queen left the dock and now, a bare seventeen weeks later, it was summer again. A summer in December, while the loch-side at home would soon be mantled with snow. The herds would be keeping their sheep close, and the heather would be dim in the glens and up the brae. ...